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Pig In A Poke
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I shall not write of tragedy
in the Shakesperean sense
for I know not of such things
and so I read
and believe
nor shall I ply
the dramatic shenanigans
of the romantics
for reasons essentially the same
and so I read
and believe
I write
in pastoral settings
gentle stories
of love, family
home and hearth,
and I scribe these tales truely
for all those
who know not of such things
so they can read
and believe
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Comments
Maverick
Wed, 2011-04-13 21:31
Well done
I love the idea of this poem! Its so different from the angry and sad pieces you usually get; it's really refreshing.
Small suggestion with the last two lines: perhaps change it to
so they can read
and believe.
I feel like it might fit better with the tone of your poem, but it's your choice, of course.
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maverick |ˈmav(ə)rik|
noun
1 an unorthodox or independent-minded person
brittle light
Thu, 2011-04-14 07:31
Yes to your suggestion...that
Yes to your suggestion...that makes it work so much better. I appreciate your input ..... THANK YOU
Al
scribbler
Wed, 2011-04-13 22:12
hello
I felt as if I could have written this, just not as well...................scribbler
brittle light
Thu, 2011-04-14 07:39
hello again
As I was composing this piece, I did think of you and your work , its syle and grace; a big part in inspiring this poem...I thank you for that, and your comments
Al
scribbler
Thu, 2011-04-14 07:45
lol
Usually what follows someone saying I inspired them is a big ol' fart lmao............stan
Eduardo Cruz
Thu, 2011-04-14 08:03
Al
I was pulled in by your title, then the poem was apropos to the title.
I have read and I do believe in all these things.
Very interesting write,so clear in it message and precise. I saw no frills or tiresome metaphor.
Thanks for posting is was a joy to read something smooth and elegant.
Eddie C.
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
brittle light
Thu, 2011-04-14 08:25
Hi Eddie
thank you for your gracious comments...very much appreciated
sincerely,
Al