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(deleted poem)

Submitted by Marie Marshall on Tue, 2011-04-12 02:08
Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Direction): 
[This option has been removed]
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Marie Marshall

Tue, 2011-04-12 08:14

I hear you, Ian, but my line-lengths etc are as deliberate as my words, for many reasons. If I allow readers to 'see' something in a state other than as I have conceived it I am party to dishonesty. I am not Esker. I do not write like Esker, nor should I try to. If I can't present my work as I wish to present it - indeed if I am simply not allowed to - then I am in the wrong place and should go where I am allowed to present it.

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Nah pop no style, a strickly roots.

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Hooded Stranger

Tue, 2011-04-12 13:47

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Marie,

i am sorry the current format doesn't allow you to present the poem how you want. I am keen to read your poem in your format, would you be kind enough to email me the poem...email address sent via PM.

kindest regards,

HS

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