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Yellow
.
the color yellow
has landed on nothing today
so I conjure it
by way of reverie and praise
a daze
of sunny disposition
girls in summer dresses
chatting of lovely things
in the light of Monet
I meditate on yellow
bathe in buttercups' haze
become a sunflower
on these awful gray days
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magics02
Sat, 2011-03-19 01:07
Oh I love this
Wow I can see the whole picture and wish we could put pictures up here with our words..it is so nice. The only suggest is to fix your yellow in your first line, other then that I liked it very much,,, summy days ..that yellow haze
Loved this part the best:
I meditate on yellow
bathe in a buttercup's haze
become a sunflower
I "think" yellow
...on these awful gray days
.
Good job
Mona
brittle light
Sun, 2011-04-10 11:33
hi, Mona
thank you....sorry for the late reply...I do appreciate your comments...glad you enjoyed this
Al
author commentbrittle light
Sun, 2011-04-10 11:37
thanks
sorry for the late reply...I have quiet days sometimes...corresponding becomes too challenging
anyway, Im glad you enjoyed this piece
Al
author commentbrittle light
Sun, 2011-04-10 11:41
Ian
thank you for your many visits... sorry I'm not a better host...I always appreciate your thoughts
Al
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