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Stainless Love
Stainless Love
I have no doubt
That you were sleeping
As those words rolled out
Neither the sun had set,
Nor were you dreaming.
Perhaps twas early morn by then,
Rise my friend
Above,
The soiled sheets of pain,
Love is the only beauty, in life
That does never at all stain
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
scribbler
Sat, 2011-04-09 17:34
hello
short sweet and to the point.................scribbler
loved
Sat, 2011-04-09 18:57
simply sweet and
kind thanks Stan the AEC man
loved
author commentloved
Sun, 2011-04-10 19:15
welcome back
hope alls well with the world
and uuuuuuuuuuuuu
and thanks
for liking this one
loved
author commentEduardo Cruz
Sun, 2011-04-10 01:30
Loved
This write is so beautiful and heart warming,
It's as if i'm seeing you for the first time.
and the mystery continues...
I know it was intented for my "little Witch" after her beautiful write.
Bravisima!!
Eddie C.
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE