beginning to wonder if this poem had gone so wrong at some point. Thanks for commenting though. And understand that I get where you are coming from with the wanting of more verses. I try to be as succinct as I can in my writing. It is a top most challenge for me to keep poems as short as possible.... and yet many of my poems can and probably should be lengthened. Maybe one day... and hopefully when that day arrives we will be both there to share their journey as we have here. Cheers, CB/FK :-)