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Renaissance
Spring, wakes
shakes her head,
salutes the sun,
washes her face
in the dew of the morning
stretching her arms
she embraces
the new day, it's
a good day
for a rebirth.
Style / type:
Free verse
Last few words:
I feel awake :) it's such a glorious day here today xxx
Editing stage:
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Comments
faerybeki
Thu, 2011-04-07 15:48
Ian, I always love your
Ian, I always love your comments, thank you :) I often drive passed Heywood (it was Heywood I think?) and always think of you. Much love Beki xxx ps I have it on good authority that the white horse misses you too :) x
'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)
author commentNordic cloud
Wed, 2011-03-23 14:57
Rebirth lovely one.
Hello Beki,
I like the spring awakening and shaking its head,
the tassels of the catkins shaking too their pollen
of rebirth onto the world renewed.
Happy to hear your spring song Beki
Love from Ann of N.
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.
faerybeki
Thu, 2011-04-07 15:50
Dear Ann, you comment is a
Dear Ann, you comment is a poem of it's own, another song to Spring :) It's wonderful when the world starts waking up again! So happy to see You Ann, much love Beki xxx
'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)
author commentfaerybeki
Thu, 2011-04-07 15:52
Hello lovely :) this one
Hello lovely :) this one skipped out lol at the time I thought it was weak but I'm not sure I want to change anything now :) love you xxx
'God turns you from one feeling to another
and teaches by means of opposites,
so that you will have two wings to fly,
not one.' (...Rumi)
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