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Simply Three

They Say!
They say times
Are for ever changing
and
All time is never the same
Tis a fact of life
But love is something
That should never change
Ah! Lust
Within the cusps of love
We must for ever retain.

Naturally Natural!
At times I love being
In my natural form
As nature saw me
When I was born,
That naturalness
Makes me love those
Who do always surround
All the year long
This life
and
Time around!

You Are That Rose!
You are that rose
This engulfs all other roses!
What a perfume
I’d love to wear
On my nose
In all poses
My apparel and everywhere,
For roses of your kind,
Are simply rare
A rose I was too,
But I’m now surpassed
My dearest
Rose,
By you
and
That’s absolutely true!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Comments

this poem was specially written
for a seventeen old kid
who can't talk
nor walk

BUT has a beautiful perception of life
the poet is a seventeen years old
young teenager
from UK

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author comment

I have read this piece and am still contemplating it...whilst I do could you explain the title, as I couldn't see (and apologies for my ignorance) how the title linked to the poem itself.

Appologies if I have missed the obvious.

HS

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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.

The poet
wrote a poem about all kinds of Roses
and thus my reply
Please kindly Sir,
do read my comments above for Shirley .
Rgds

loved

author comment

cheers!

HS

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With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth, yet nobody sees me.

three cheers for u tooo
ur a great poet
we all know
thanks for ur kindness
loved

loved

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