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feed me

Submitted by Esker on Fri, 2011-04-01 12:22

"feed me"

and I always do
always for the pleasure
when you thrive
within
so I can live without

I know when you are me

and as much I hate
you for recieving so much
attention

I miss you

existance you whisper
harshly
is a cost
to consume

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Esker

Sat, 2011-04-02 10:17

Esker's picture

for me thats what And feels like
I used to use the typewriter a lot and I miss the physical
action of it
nothing like articulation
like I like peoples minds in conversations
its just about the many inner selves
that exist and drive me
long ago I was split
driven into partitions
like a haunted hotel
many floors and many rooms

thanks for the comment

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