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EMOTIONAL EXPRESSION

Submitted by Bonitaj on Thu, 2011-03-31 10:48

I learnt from you
That less is more
Emotional Expression uncensored
Bites to the core

Vitriolic rants damage the speaker
Reputations are tarnished, others keep score
Both friends and lovers are lost
Forever more…

Bjr 31 March '11

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
ps. In treating Schizophrenia, one talks of EE - (EMOTIONAL EXPRESSION)the level of communication, and in this disorder, it is normally chaotic and very destructive - hence the nature of this piece.
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

magics02

Thu, 2011-03-31 13:24

But very powerful this write Boni. You hit this spot on gal.

Blessings
Mona

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