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Submitted by Esker on Thu, 2011-03-17 12:33

moving so swift
I dont want to touch down
to swallow this pain

alone
in all whirlpool sensations
just let me drown

put on this iron crown
let love's chains
drag me down

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Fri, 2011-03-18 14:24

been here
for so many years
in country

lahlahland has more turns then I ever expected
and Im pleased that there are people
whom are treasures

your comments are poems as are others
they for me are more worth then my works

maybe Im finally turning towards a more
human me

I'll never truly know

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Sun, 2011-03-20 09:21

Oh this surrealist picture is extraordinary,
swallowing pain
touch down, heavy,
whirpool
drown love's
chains
iron

So many weights and strengths
expressing themselves in us
as we read.

LuvAnn.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.