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Unto Dust

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a pebble...
once a mighty stone
perhaps the one
slung at the head of Goliath
maybe
maybe not
the odds would certainly defy it

but, who knows

once a mighty stone
ground down
through time

once a mighty stone
long, long ago

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Once a mighty stone! Very enjoyable poem.

always, Cat

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