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A Life's Song
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.....A Life's Song.....
blue swells of sadness
gliding atop a cool groove
she knows it by heart
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Comments
Kailashana2
Wed, 2011-03-16 07:32
he molts poems
he molts poems
she understands
why
~A
brittle light
Wed, 2011-03-16 12:58
yes! slough the slight ones,
yes! slough the slight ones, and hopefully, a new batch will sprout with more vigor, vitality, and heart!
Al
Race_9togo
Wed, 2011-03-16 15:43
Brittle
This is excellent, so much packed into so litte, with so much feeling.
"a'top" needs no apostraphe
But who cares; this is wonderful.
Respectfully, Race
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brittle light
Wed, 2011-03-16 19:45
Jim
thanks. I haven't been around much for a couple of months (on Neopoet). I ran out of anything to say.
still not sure if I can come up with anything worth saying, let alone saying it well...but I suppose I'll keep returning and hope. (though I do like this little piece a lot ). Your input is always very encouraging. thanks again
Al