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Neopoet Weekly 06/09/24 to 06/15/24 Winner!
This week’s winner is Lavender with the following poem
Winning Poem
Magic
Submitted by Lavender
A falling star settled on my rose,
a diamond dipped in velvet clothes.
I dared not touch the pure gift
sent from heaven, so swift,
but let it rest there
in such sweet air
and comply
to my
wish.
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Comments
Michael Anthony
Sun, 2024-06-16 09:20
Love the imagery in this one
Love the imagery in this one L - congrats!
Best
Michael Anthony
Lavender
Sun, 2024-06-16 12:07
Thank you, Michael!
It was a bit of fun!
L
kowque
Fri, 2024-06-21 18:53
I don't know how you manage
To make every line read and feel so lovely.
Koki
Lavender
Sun, 2024-06-23 14:44
Hello, Koki,
How kind you are! Thank you for such a wonderful comment. I am very grateful!
L