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Push Me
I am the emperor of my empire
‘his majesty, the king’
‘her majesty the Queen’
I am the warrior in my
Life's battle-field,
I am the twilight of my dawn
and my own sky star,
the illumination that
motivates me
and the motivation that
inspires
and when there's no one
to give me a push
I tell I
"push me".
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-18 12:50
dear Rula,
I love how it is all interconnected. a beautiful job!
*hugs, Cat
*
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Rula
Wed, 2023-01-18 13:20
Thank you dearest Cat
It's been just a thought. I hope I don't sound like bragging or so. It's what the title of the contest inspires.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting dear
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author commentWords.unwritten
Wed, 2023-01-18 13:30
Self motivation should be the
Self motivation should be the only motivation.... and we all should give ourselves a little push at times
Rula
Fri, 2023-01-20 14:55
Thank you
Totally agree. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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author commentRosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2023-01-19 04:54
Nice flex
Astounding. I have some suggestions.
I am the emperor of my empire
the ‘his majesty, the king’
and ‘her majesty the Queen’
I am the warrior in my
Life's battle-field,
I am the twilight of my dawn
and my own sky star,
the (illumination) that
motivates me
and the motivation that
inspires
and when there's no one
to give me a push
I tell I
"push me".
That might strengthen a strong poem,
Stupendous,
Tim
Rula
Fri, 2023-01-20 14:59
Thank you Tim
For reading and the suggestion. I implemented as suggested.I’m happy you like my poem.
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author commentLavender
Thu, 2023-01-19 10:10
Push Me
Hello, Rula,
A great idea for this theme. Bold! I'm not certain "the" and "and" are necessary in the second and third lines, but I understand the reason for using them. A wonderful inspiring read!
L
Rosewood Apothecary
Thu, 2023-01-19 11:40
I’ll second that
Good eyes. Or ears. Or mind’s ear I suppose. But yes, I’ll agree to that.
Rula
Fri, 2023-01-20 15:04
Dearest Lav and Tim
Always wonderful to hear from you .Your on spot suggestions are taken and implemented. Can’t thank you enough friends.
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