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The Blessed One

How I'm blessed today, what 'bout you
Are you blessed too
Has the sun shone
Onto your throne

Have you woken up safe and sound
With health you're crowned
Are you to sing
what spring would bring

Then, you are free;
the king to be
You're the man
Of all times' span.

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Structured: Western
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hello, Rula,
Wise sentiments. Well said, and perfect title!
Happy New Year to you!
L

Maybe it felt a bit Hallmarky?
I thought I'd post it anyway.
Thank you for coming to this.

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It’s gorgeous, of course I am a sentimental being. One correction:

Have you waken up safe and sound

waken should be woken.

Other than that it’s perfect,
Tim

Thank you twice and million times for the kind visit and especially for the head ups.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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author comment

I think it is fun and light. a little cheer never hurt anyone!

*love, Cat

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