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The Blessed One
How I'm blessed today, what 'bout you
Are you blessed too
Has the sun shone
Onto your throne
Have you woken up safe and sound
With health you're crowned
Are you to sing
what spring would bring
Then, you are free;
the king to be
You're the man
Of all times' span.
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Sat, 2022-12-31 15:12
The Blessed One
Hello, Rula,
Wise sentiments. Well said, and perfect title!
Happy New Year to you!
L
Rula
Sat, 2022-12-31 17:01
Thank you dear
Maybe it felt a bit Hallmarky?
I thought I'd post it anyway.
Thank you for coming to this.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2022-12-31 17:30
Greeting card? Nah
It’s gorgeous, of course I am a sentimental being. One correction:
Have you waken up safe and sound
waken should be woken.
Other than that it’s perfect,
Tim
Rula
Sun, 2023-01-01 04:45
Hello dear Tim
Thank you twice and million times for the kind visit and especially for the head ups.
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-01-01 07:43
dear Rula,
I think it is fun and light. a little cheer never hurt anyone!
*love, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Mon, 2023-01-02 01:16
I feel blesses when
poets of NEO
read me
you to Rula