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CHILL ALSO INSPIRES

Have lived in minus 35 degrees
winter

my it was
chill

as snow flakes
sheared my eyes

when I used to fetch my
GCS

My they were so
impressed

loved me
hugged me
of course 'em
I kissed

my then bent back
straightened up

what darn
chill!

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
EVEN CHILL FLAMES HUMANS
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

..darned my dang dungarees..the wind was whistling right through them. -35C...I almost said darn, but dang sang.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

Tanks...thanxxxxxxxxxxxx lol

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I'm darning my dang dungarees
for the horrible holes in the knees
though you might think it silly
but my willy gets chilly
when it hangs below zero degrees

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

I'm darning my dang dungarees
cuz it's gone below zero degrees
though you might think it silly
but my willy gets chilly
when it hangs through the hole in the knees

Thomas

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.

...so like my lost dreams...the flood

but my willy gets chilly....

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