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Ephemeral Happiness ( Euphonous English WS part#2)
Seize
All the
Ephemeral
Happiness that
Life is offering, whenever you can
For they'll fly one by one 'way in no span;
They'll be drifted
Forever
Away
Man
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Tetractys, a poetic form invented by Ray Stebbing, consists of at least 5 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 syllables (total of 20). Tetractys can be written with more than one verse, but must follow suit with an inverted syllable count. Tetractys can also bereversed and written 10, 4, 3, 2, 1.
Double Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1
Triple Tetractys: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Race_9togo
Sat, 2022-11-12 16:13
Hey Rula,
its been awhile, Palestinian Lady, I hope you and your family are well.
This little piece is wonderful, short, but so powerful, and absolutely true.
Respectfully, Race
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Rula
Sun, 2022-11-13 03:41
Great to hear
From you Jim
All is well. Hope you and yours are doing well too.
Really appreciate your time and the support.
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Rula
Sun, 2022-11-13 08:28
Thank you Mark
For your quick response and the appreciation.without your workshop I wouldn't have written any.
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Geezer
Sun, 2022-11-13 11:32
Changing...
and ephemeral pleasures, are the product of fertile minds. A mind that is not used, becomes stagnant and useless. I se that you have found ways to keep actively engaging in the world of poetry. Your use of the many forms of poetry, are astonishing.
Good work! ~ Geezer.
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Rula
Sun, 2022-11-13 11:53
Thank you sir
I feel like I need a new hat after such flattering.
Blushing too :)
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Rosewood Apothecary
Mon, 2022-11-14 05:47
Always enlightened
Great to have discovered a new format. Seems fairly restrictive and I dig your choice of words given the somewhat limited options.
Tim
Rula
Wed, 2022-11-16 16:05
Tim
Always gtrat to hear from the masters. Your kind visit is highly appreciated.
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