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A ballerina of blue
A ballerina
blissfully bended
in blue
reaches out
into the
overbearing
embrace of
empty space .
Hopelessly
hankering for
the fondness
of a familiar face
to set all her
life’s pieces
back into
place .
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Rosewood Apothecary
Tue, 2022-07-26 19:55
Amazing as usual
You’re a good poet. That is all,
Tim
Edward nigma
Tue, 2022-07-26 20:52
Thank you
My inspiration https://youtu.be/bELgmDwW5d8 and https://youtu.be/9nSaxXh6J_o
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
author commentlovedly
Tue, 2022-07-26 20:35
you are still a very good poet ...O kid
your poetry is meritorious
You have read me
earlier
Edward nigma
Tue, 2022-07-26 20:47
Thank you
I wrote this while being bed bound and listening to music which helps illuminate an idea in my head . Was listening to the song round and round and it gave me the image of a blue ballerina.
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
author commentlovedly
Tue, 2022-07-26 21:23
very good
I am deaf
but listen little well
with earphones
Listen to a song BY NORAH JONES ...COME AWAY WITH ME ...
ALSO SEE AMERICAN AUDITIONS
IT helps in passing time
when one is confined
all the best young bold man
Edward nigma
Tue, 2022-07-26 21:53
Thank you friend
Yes I usually listen to music on low volume because i have sensory issues I don’t like loud noises
I usually just listen to the beginning of the song ,
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
author commentlovedly
Tue, 2022-07-26 22:22
AS you wish
I can follow all limitations of guys like us
Take care
c lynn brooks
Tue, 2022-07-26 20:48
Edward
Just one little suggestion , if I may instead of bended try bends an see if you like that any better, Good title
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Geezer
Tue, 2022-07-26 23:22
I would have...
used [bent]. I really like the wishing for a fond face to help with the putting of
her life's pieces back in place.I can see the face, huge with beautiful blue eyes
in the tiny ballerina's perspective.The ballerina being one on top of a music-box
playing tinkly-music and the ballerina going 'round and 'round. Nice vision. ~ Geez.
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