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Clueless

Submitted by Lillyput91 on Fri, 2022-06-03 23:29

You are completely
clueless
as too what this has
done
I can assure you
this has been no fun
it is ridiculous
the way you behave
your a complete nuisance
some might say!

Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction): 
How was my language use?
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Contest: 
I Like I Don't Like
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Candlewitch

Sat, 2022-06-04 03:57

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welcome to the Neopoet poetry site. it is very nice to meet you. if you need help or have any questions, please ask me. if I cannot help, I will find someone who can. I completely understand your poem! I have a nephew who was always doing outrageous things. and he couldn't figure out why he was always in trouble! I am looking forward to reading more of your poems.

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Jackweb

Sun, 2022-06-05 12:10

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Welcome to neopoet!

Just know there's no perfection in human character, attitude. So, you don't expect good output from people all the time. Some people needs to be managed hence we all are in learning curve. There are times we need to ignore some certain behaviours from folks within us.

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

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