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THE RUNNING STREAM

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2022-05-29 22:13

Merges with the ocean
fathomed
in the deep sea
none can a fresh poem
now read
who will dive deep
to find all ole NEOS
poems
just you all must
THINK
a rare commodity poets ever ink

Lost in the oblivion of time
till you are well seated and sublime
in NEOS Chair
I never sat
so who will ever know me
Only a while thee
Gee
Cat may be

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Mon, 2022-05-30 05:35

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although I'm but a little bubble in the stream I float well and flow up to your well spring of poems. you are a poet among poets and I hope to get caught in the current.

*hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Mon, 2022-05-30 12:36

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you are no bubble
YOU ARE THE ATLANTIC

WE ARE THE ONES
gasping like fish
to breathe

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lovedly

Mon, 2022-05-30 22:11

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IS NOT FLOWING MOVING STUCK 9 HOURS???

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Candlewitch

Tue, 2022-05-31 06:46

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did you report it? if so when?

*hugs, Cat

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Candlewitch

Tue, 2022-05-31 06:49

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it seems to be fine now.

*Hugs, Cat

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lovedly

Tue, 2022-05-31 15:19

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'tis

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