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It's hard to breathe
It's hard to breathe
When she
Does that thing
With her tongue and her thigh
At the same time.
I
Feel like gravity
Got away from me
I
Die
It’s hard to breathe when I
reply
With a sigh
And say “higher, harder”
And she does.
And I...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-05-22 06:18
hello!
this very suggestive piece is new and fresh and exciting! (without being obscene) I like it very much. I usually pick out my favorite lines of a poem, but I would not break this poem up as I loved the whole thing! very imaginative! I would gladly read more of your poetry...I will look for them in the "stream"
*hugs, Cat
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