interesting title! pretty good flow.

in this line: A terrible listener who prefers to stay in (the) cold
I love myself the way it is (I love myself the way I am)
Be (it) with someone or not

a good piece depicting what you want and don't want!

welcome to Neopoet. don't be shy in reading other poet's poems and commenting :)

*hugs, Cat

You've a very nice piece! Work on the lines Candlewitch had already pinpointed.

Beautiful flow!

You can raise yourself to new levels
if you follow the advice of Cat and Jack. I'm afraid
that you have mistaken the words [soul and ghoul]
for rhyming words as they look very similar, but they
have different pronunciations. You might use these words as
a rhyming line and still have about the same meaning.

You don't have to look at a soul
that wants only silence as her role.
For the most part, I understand the poem and I think
that you will develop as a good poet, but you will have to read
a lot of the work here and decide for yourself what things you like to write about.
Just remember to get the proper sounds out of the words you want to use.
I know that English is a hard language to learn, because it has many diferent nuances
but you can do it. Good luck and keep writing. ~ Geezer.
.

very nicely done!

*hugs, Cat