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Elfchen 01____Proverb
Proverb
Wisdom workshop
Growing up culture
Pregnant of long sayings
Bellyful!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Babalola promio
Fri, 2022-04-29 09:13
This my first poem here, how
This my first poem here, how is it?
author commentCandlewitch
Fri, 2022-04-29 09:41
hello and welcome
welcome to Neopoet. we are always glad to see a new member amongst our ranks! I'm not sure what your poem means. but I would like to learn. could you explain it to me, please? thanks.
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Ray Whitaker
Sat, 2022-04-30 11:05
WELCOME to the website!
Nice to see more folks from Africa.
I look forward to reading more of your work!
I had to look up "Elfchen". here is what I found: An "Elfchen" is similar to a Haiku in that it has a set form, however it is unique in that it has 11 words, the lines having 1-2-3-4-1 words, respectively.
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