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NOTHING MOVES

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2022-03-13 14:32

Until you move
or are so moved
or else
you yourself want to remove

yes nothing can ever move
neither
SUN
nor
MOON
Now come home soon

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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scribbler

Sun, 2022-03-13 19:59

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This one is unclear in message I think

lovedly

Sun, 2022-03-13 20:43

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it is just a silly comment
on a sillier poem I just read
I think all sites must ensure poems are posted
after vetting sensibilly
else poetry will appear to be
like cats and dogs only
what say now thee

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lovedly

Sun, 2022-03-13 21:42

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the kiss
lips are divine
they are fine
but none on earth
can lips
of my kind
ever find

I wear no mask
for I love my task
just kiss me
like a fairy
see

how love flows
from my lips
as it flows

this kiss was lovely
didn’t you
feel it o silly

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