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DARKNESS OF NIGHTS
See night has fallen
into slumber
dark and deep
snow it is about to sweep
bullets pellets of chilled rain
still remain
to pierce hearts
which in Neo remain
to tighten my poetic vein
they hold my reigns
tomorrow you may not see
now sleep right away
other poets swear
they are not being read
only eyes are being bled
obey ere by the morn
one is found dead
no blood left red
Good night fella
poeyets
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-03-03 08:36
dear lovedly,
sleep well and may your dreams always take you to beautiful, pleasant places. as you deserve all the best.
*love & hugs, Cat & eddy
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lovedly
Thu, 2022-03-03 11:01
Kindness Cats
You raise my morale
above the nights darkest skies
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-03-03 11:05
thank you friend,
it is no trouble and very good to know!
*hugs and love, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Tracey Underwood
Thu, 2022-03-03 11:38
Wow!
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Its use of word imagery was great. Looking to reading more of your work. Love and light. Namaste.
Love and light. Namaste.
lovedly
Thu, 2022-03-03 12:10
WOW FOR SAYING WOW
Well just a WOW