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Here I Come Again

You compose it on my behalf
and
I will stamp it fast

I know you do read
only you remain agreed
that my poetry does breed

but alas as Jess
said legs up in the air
come and read me,
if you can't come in
at least cum
he did it mean

he was our poetry chef,
I couldn't or dared not take liberties
ere he mixed chilies

rum in my wine
and cuisine

but so be it

I shall compose
as I always do a poem
as per his indelible norms
even if
'tis to be read only by you
my only friend one
you are like my guardian

at your earnest behest
I leave it to the rest

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I like your descriptions of Jess's comments, yes, he was a stickler for certain ways of expression, but he was not always all there. Sometimes he was a real prick. I guess you must see something of him in me sometimes, the way I keep after you.
Be that as it may, I always read you and you can be sure that I will say something under my breath even if I don't write it out loud! LoL
~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

I gave this oceanic one to you
don't drown me like a fish
neo still needs me

4 nearly 5 firsts
ask stan
you must be holding records
of poetic jokers like me
I admire thee
for using a double edged knife
sharper one to slice
the other blunter side to butter
softly lest some one catches ye
lol
GEE

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I know when they are meant for me. Thanks Lovey. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Sustainability is how you maintain and extend life's rosy standards to future generations too.

you know it too Gee

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