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Reformation
Moon.
My silent witness.
Reflection of creation.
Where karma sits in residence.
Let go.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
I'm back from hibernation -- hope you're all doing well. Time to reconnect...
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Triskelion
Wed, 2022-02-09 12:26
Hi Owl
Nice to see you back.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Ray Whitaker
Thu, 2022-02-10 12:46
Made me stretch
I was wondering if the shortness of this piece could be expanded some. by stretching, I mean that I had to reach for the obscure connotations of some of the words you chose.
Dictionary definition of Reformation: the act of reforming; state of being reformed.
I really like the context of reformation. I just feel that your poems to be expanded.
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