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TOMORROW did come and went

Tomorrow will be the coldest day
minus 24 the Met guy does say
wait till it's all over
how can One write
of the snow

Till it comes and goes
just hope it snows

Wow met guys are too good
the whole night minus 24 the temperature stood
and snowed all night
though light

now the temperature is same
despite
the sun is white
and
bright

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
I HAVE NOT COMPOSED A POEM SINCE A LONG TIME SO MANY LINGERING THEIR TAILS TO BE STROKED COME SOME NEO TIGER
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

One of the first I read today, my first day back in a while.
But of course, considering the poet, good is to be expected.

Respectfully, Race

"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo

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Race enjoi my slower pace

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