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NOT NEW Evanescence from my archives 2018

Evanescence
the heart fears
the loss of someone
once so loved

would we lose all memory
a loved one lost to eternity
in moments
like a rainbow in the sky
after a brief rainy storm
just comes and vanishes
in a moment

like the rainbow
across the Niagara mist
does
Evanescent

sense of fragrance it does leave
but fading memory a fear breeds

will ye forget the one that came
but now has gone

a young one
just of three days
only
lost her mommy

sad isn't it
but it's destiny

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Free verse
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succinct lol

now review thanks

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