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RUNNING AWAY NOVEMBER CONTEST 9
Running Away
why
coz read below
be not shy
Utter poetic poverty
suffer from it poets
one too many
it's the negation art
of not commenting
Is it limited to poets
only
poetic brevity
Mistaken Identity
no not really
I'm real creativity
mistake not me
in reality
Wind next to heart
jokes apart
but cliche don't recall
'coz wind and heart to date
none can ever prostrate
City street lights
It's very dull and cloudy
now during day
'tis like blackened night's
all have to inside
homes switch on lights
Mayor now sanctioned street lights
In half an hour throughout the night
so early be the goodnight
for couples may it be
blossoming bright
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Ray Whitaker
Sun, 2021-11-14 22:34
For some time now I have wondered
About where I read your style of writing before….
Your work reminds me, really, of e.e.cummings. My sister gave me the Complete Works of his, and I enjoyed the book.
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lovedly
Sun, 2021-11-14 19:00
Thank you Ray
I'm sure you mean well