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WE ALL CIRCLE TIS WINDY
CIRCLES
We as does the wind
keep circling
as whirl winds
at times very cold
slowly warming till we hasten circling
what the wind
no no no
ourselves all should by now know
circling makes us all glow
we like the Thames Nile and other rivers flow
then off we go to blow
as the wind often whistles
does follow
but loud
not soft
so lie low
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Wed, 2021-11-10 16:45
Anytime...
people circle around and around, it's just more blowhard stuff! While the wind whistles, everybody should just lie low, because sometimes it's just whistling in the dark. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Wed, 2021-11-10 18:42
thank you
thank you Gee long time no wind no blow may any day now go lol oh no not yet
Geezer
Wed, 2021-11-10 22:07
No worries mate...
They ain't about to get me yet! Recovering little by little. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Wed, 2021-11-10 22:33
missed u GEE
were u ill better now hoppingly lol
Geezer
Thu, 2021-11-11 08:32
Thank you...
Yeah, had bad cold, and now on the mend
~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Owl Has My Soul
Thu, 2021-11-11 07:17
HI lovedly,
I think I am in awe of the ethereal beauty of your work. You invite me to de-link from language and leap into pure instinct and imagery and all the feels...
Jamie
lovedly
Thu, 2021-11-11 11:39
thank you so muchleee
no need of any awe really
as you speak spiritually
I naturally