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Boys Charm Not Sex

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2021-09-18 22:59

On the beach within easy reach
all were enjoying a lovely son
even he was having fun ~~boy's dilemma

this is abs imagery
a guy was simply surrounded by younger gals
wanting to buy lips sticks

perhaps negligees
this just struck my mind
what a lucky sweet guy

maybe just 17 plus
beautifuller than all gals
enjoying aroma at their expense

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Inspired By Ray
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sun, 2021-09-19 07:54

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that this is about a transgender person, or cross-dresser? It leaves lots to the imagination. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Sun, 2021-09-19 12:53

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He was just a shy guy
selling smaller things
cross dressing and all that
I did not see
he wore tight jeans

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lovedly

Wed, 2021-10-20 19:36

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read it tis charming

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