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CYNOSURE OF YOUR EYES A POEM OF 2014 READ BY1350

I was 18
really wildly romantic
became poem
for many a poet
very cute when young
composed romantically
world loves it mostly

also keep changing avatars
logos and your signatures
gals will fly in
like butterflies
guys will silently admire

I'm since aged
yet my mind is very fresh

love to compose
love poems

as we dance prance and romance
every day in beautiful France

good lovely poetic
romantic friends
stay tuned in
I'm now passing
towards eternity
are you coming

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Just one life to live--- So Love it
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

have a young mind and being fresh in your approach to love, but changing your presentation of personal attributes, and avatars, will make sure that you only confuse those that want to love you. I wonder if that is the point? ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

No one would like to love me
the way you think Gee
lol
NO confusion
tis just a poem
now olden....

author comment

love-relationships have to be sexual or physical. Many of my love relationships are purely platonic. But even a platonic one can be trying, if you constantly change the platform that is the person you are.
~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Gee you know me
what sort of a person you think
as of me

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