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Night Rider
Turn an eye to the
lonely sky
with billowing clouds
pregnant with rain
hiding a waning moon
winds are screaming to the night
ti's an omen
so they say
Heed where ye travel
beware what ye do
above all whisper
the words ye shall say
For he rides
in the dark
searching for men to slay
would it be the ones gone wrong
with debauchery and lie
of the evil
that men do
Keep a razor sharp eye
take care lest you stray
into a cold and darkened night
he is waiting to take your soul
and there is no giving back
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
I lean heavily on ine breaks
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Jackweb
Fri, 2021-09-10 16:48
Excellent piece
I heartily love the construction. You employed enjambment (line breaks) to the final stage. Literary device is a tool used by writers to hint at larger themes, ideas and meaning in a piece of work. The poem is structural, grammatical, rhythmic, verbal, and visual elements are visible here.
You possess a soul of a good poet.
Nice job!
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
c lynn brooks
Fri, 2021-09-10 18:11
thank you
Ever so much for your visit. It is appreciated
Chrys
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Jackweb
Fri, 2021-09-10 23:28
Your welcome
Have a great day!
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Geezer
Sat, 2021-09-11 09:34
I like this...
and you know that Killer was looking over my shoulder and saying; "Yes, yes! ~ Geez.
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c lynn brooks
Sat, 2021-09-11 21:27
Gee
Many thanks to you and Killer
Chrys
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