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Détente

Thunder before rain
A rainbow offers a truce
from the raging storm

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Structured: Eastern
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Fooling around with the Haiku form tonight.
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Not Explicit Content

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that you need something like [Nature's] to go with the Detente or Detente Au Natural? ~ Geez.
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Thanks Geez! I was stretching the definition of the word "Detente" here: "The easing of hostility or strained relations", so I thought it appropriate with the poem. Maybe it worked, or maybe not, LOL.

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Michael Anthony

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Good job! ~ Geez.
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