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Nostalgic Feeling
A gent tipped his hat
in a gesture of greeting
his smile hid a hint
of nostalgia fleeting
not a word did he speak,but I understood
he had come from a time
when life was good
when a simple thank you
was all one need say
when a little kindness went a long way
I saw an old couple
walking arm in arm
their smiles hid a hint of old world charm
not a word did they speak,but I understood
they had from a time when life was good
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
and ya'll thought all I wrote was free verse lol
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Geezer
Thu, 2021-07-29 06:49
I like it...
but you will have to keep up now.
Ok, a couple of things; I think you should use a slightly different form of
nostalgia. I would say: [nostalgic feeling].
2] A typo- [word] not rod?
3] [hint] not hit, unless they are masochists. LoL
I will leave it to Stan to tell you how you did.
Great to see you posting! ~ Geez.
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Geezer
Thu, 2021-07-29 08:04
Good...
I see that you have made some changes. Now, keep up as best you can. ~ Geez.
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