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Diamonds In Our Galaxy.
I have more friends
across the Internet
they all are like Diamonds
in the bright galaxy
just searching for poets like
wee wee
here so many with fragrance of poetry
Poets many like you all here still
and I
waiting at the estuary
someday the wind will submerge me
more newer ones will be born
human existence
will continue to carry on
Covid will become just a distinct memory
many more worse may creatively emerge
human race of course will never converge
we will all meet
but unknowingly at the juncture
of Time,where integrate
Infinity with Eternity
You will never know me
but poetic friends for ever we shall be
all who love this Heavenly ~Earth
combo, just be happy
Time's Blessings
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Thu, 2021-06-17 14:30
I have no doubt...
that we shall meet at the convergence of infinity one day. And it is a sad truth, that once we are gone from this earth, we will not be remembered past our relationships here and now; except that we make some awesome breakthrough in the sciences or literary legend. But our parts we will remember and hold dear. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Thu, 2021-06-17 17:26
Yes in reality we all will be
Positive then only
as pictures./snaps /photographs
hanging on walls of Time
and the negative body will be no more than ashes
or food for the creatures of the Earth living below
as energy cannot be destroyed theoretically
but we will be two apparitions and neighbours could be
at the time's periphery
Deny not that to me
you will be Gee
and I will always be me,, Lovedly
No scientist has ever been born
as thinkest thee O gee
but don't from the Earth ever flee
before it is timely
Maybe stay longer till you have created
a new member
in caps
GEE
Possibly
Triskelion
Thu, 2021-06-17 18:07
There are
some really inspirational lines in your poem, lovedly. I aspire to write with your metaphorical skill.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Thu, 2021-06-17 21:25
May you be blessed
I am by birth gifted ~~~~not much of a poet though ~~~~yet many thousands all over the Internet have read me
Thanks you are one also rgds friend