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Which am I...~~~By Lovedly please me

Doctor Jekyll~~~ Mr Hyde
two in one body reside
inside
one for day as doc
the other for night
knock knock

believe me I am the real
loved
then
lovedone
then
lovedly
then
Rosy me

Now I'm done
Someone help me
who am I can you tell me
a sole imagery in eternity
or infinity
least of all in oblivion

if this poem gets posted
as from Lovedly
I am then the real one
Loved /Lovedly
ROSE flower one

Some one resolve
the mystery for me .

Some think I am young
others feel I need now
to RIP

what is your opinion
will you tell me
Paul Gee or Stan
anyone

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
This poem is from Lovedly real one
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

sure who you are, but your riddle based poem is really refreshing.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

why a DOT ONLY

author comment

The comment was for someone else. For you, the name is not important, it is the man behind the scene! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

So much. Are we sure he didn’t ghostwrite this?

The piece remiinds me of “Doctor Jimmy and Mr Jim” and some the duality in life.

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MY LAPS TOP GETS ZINXED an old model as me
now they show me as ROSY ME
will continue till I enter the Blue Sea
continue to read as
LOVEDLY
my plea

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kindness always and ever pays
there's problem these days

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I wait and see
at sea

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