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Just in case : Adieu
SOS
Can't properly access Sent message to Paul and stan
sorry no shouting gee sos can you help restore my PW tnx
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Free verse
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Tue, 2021-06-08 22:38
Why are you shouting?...
We can hear you fine!
~ Geez
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
ROSYME
Thu, 2021-06-10 14:42
sorry not shouting Gee
half blind fully deaf new hearing Aid partially helps
My lovedly one has been lost
at what cost
This id is Rosy Me just managed it
Let's see what Paul does
else no more poems from me
perhaps.
SOS
OR else all will think in advance
RIP
WHO?
I am lovedly all know it
still living for Neos
Geezer
Thu, 2021-06-10 14:55
Your profile shows up as lovedly...
I don't know what problem you are having. We see and reply to lovedly.
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
ROSYME
Thu, 2021-06-10 15:05
Gee
Please read
Who Am I
just posted
It says Rosy me
There is a FU some where
kindly ask Paul to resolve it please
Dear Gee
Triskelion
Wed, 2021-06-09 08:29
lovedly
There seems to be such a flood of passion in your text, it is hard to decide where to begin. But, for starters; Your use of the word COVID really detracts from the idea of infinity. It doesn't suit in my opinion. Please try to use a metaphor for death that is unique. I know you can. I hope your health is not the subject of your piece.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
ROSYME
Sat, 2021-06-12 18:45
thanks
tris