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alone
Represent it cause you’re in it,
don’t you love the way life lies?
Deep in the despair, rise in originality,
there dwells loneliness, it's embellished.
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
dont have any
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Mon, 2021-05-17 12:16
There are so many...
ways that this can be taken. The only thing that I would change is the word [rise] I would use [risen]. ~ Geez.
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