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WHAT HAS HAPPENED

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2021-04-08 13:07

NO MOVEMENT TODAY
ITS a very sunny day
Why not come and play
Let's make hay
what do you all say

Silence disturbs
wonder the world is caught
in some kinda
tsunami

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Silence is like a mourning morning
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Fri, 2021-04-09 09:16

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a sudden silence! Sometimes, I feel it when there is something of great importance about to happen or in the aftermath of a calamity. Hmmm... ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Fri, 2021-04-09 11:36

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but why was Neopoet's resting for hours
it unnerved me
Gee
O what a relief

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