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The Second Coming

They line their lawn chairs
next to one another,
polarized shades cover their eyes,
a drink in one hand,
a pennant in the other.

Facing East,
a sunbeam blinds them
as they anticipate
the Risen Savior.

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Style / type: 
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Anticipation is everything, right?
Happy Easter to you and yours, too!
Thank you!
L

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savior! Put him on the mound and let him pitch his best sermon! ~ Geez.
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There ya go!
Thank you!
L

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