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The Second Coming
They line their lawn chairs
next to one another,
polarized shades cover their eyes,
a drink in one hand,
a pennant in the other.
Facing East,
a sunbeam blinds them
as they anticipate
the Risen Savior.
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Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Sat, 2021-04-03 18:50
Hi, Teddy
Anticipation is everything, right?
Happy Easter to you and yours, too!
Thank you!
L
Geezer
Sat, 2021-04-03 20:42
A modern day...
savior! Put him on the mound and let him pitch his best sermon! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Lavender
Sat, 2021-04-03 21:30
Hi, Geezer
There ya go!
Thank you!
L
lovedly
Mon, 2022-08-08 21:59
as they anticipate
as they (anticipate)
did you mean
imagine....
sorry
do correct me 'tis poetry
Lavender
Tue, 2022-08-09 13:32
Hello, Lovedly,
Nope, I do believe this group was expecting or anticipating, much more than imagining.
Thank you for reading!
L
lovedly
Tue, 2022-08-09 15:34
oo what an awakening
It seems I commented w/o understanding
you meant a particular group god bless em
and you too
thank q