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Dull Sunday

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2021-03-28 16:26

Let me leave
the world today
twill neopoets '
activate
but
don't take me me seriously
I am just lazy
with a mind hazy
all asleep

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Gracy

Sun, 2021-03-28 19:01

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Hi Lovedly, I feel rather like that myself. Sort of apathetic. You've expressed it all in a few lines.
Best wishes and may you become energetic soon...lol.
Gracy

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"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

lovedly

Sun, 2021-03-28 19:28

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when life ebbs
at the corner stone of time
where then is left
any reason to rhyme

Sunday has gone
as the night
let's once again rise
at the new dawn
wherein lies the surprise
for all remaining future's morn

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Seren

Mon, 2021-03-29 02:37

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OK I'm here to kick your butt. Stop trying to get attention and write poetry. I've just commented on a wonderful poem you wrote a while back. Sweets we all know you are capable. If you write a POEM not a plea for attention I will comment on it. And make suggestions if they are warranted.

Hugs and love.

P.s. I'm so glad you're still here <3

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Mon, 2021-03-29 10:15

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you are my new JESS
Kick me hard so that I fly beyond the sky
and now you also know why

Today is a sunny day
Compose a poem i may//// lol
Thanks for being my mentor
I have a lot to learn yet

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