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Lip Me If You Will

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2021-03-06 15:23

You speak of
Quality
its like the taste on one's lips
always tastes differently
even with the same pair
or
another one
just to compare
men
are always hungry
women
love to cook different curry
so of
Quality
don't worry
all skip me in a quicker hurry
as all of you will

come lip me still

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
When I was young and beautiful everyone lipped me ----now as Shakespeare says ''sans sans sans'' no one lips me ---fear of Covid lol
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sun, 2021-03-07 07:53

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You are the most shameless narcissist I know! Your reflection in the mirror must be envious! How beautiful you are!
Geez.
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lovedly

Sun, 2021-03-07 12:09

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since 1923
you r my mirror
daily i c
thee
NARCISSISTIC
LEMME B
not shameless clothes
I wear latest
mostly top less...
lol

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lovedly

Wed, 2021-05-26 15:32

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SEND ME TO PLACE OF REMAND

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