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Self-enhancing humor
I always think
I should have been
A Comedian
Because I always
Make myself laugh
Especially
When I look in the mirror.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Mon, 2021-02-22 13:02
Self-enhancing Humor
Hi, Teddy,
Knowing the positive persona you have here on Neopoet, I am reading this as truly a bit of humor. (If not, please, please take a second look!) I see this as a reminder that we must remember to laugh at ourselves!
Thank you!
L
(Maybe take out one of the "always" ?)
Teddy15
Mon, 2021-02-22 13:07
LOL
My dear Lavender, i was talking to the reader lol only a bit of fun. Exactly my message you are so clever
Thank you...Teddy
c lynn brooks
Mon, 2021-02-22 16:17
Teddy
you sure make me laugh with your comedy writes keep them up you have such a talent for them
Chrys
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Teddy15
Mon, 2021-02-22 19:58
Dear Chrys
If they make you laugh then I will.indeed keep them coming, thank you for having fun with me, it's good to laugh. X
Thank you...Teddy
Geezer
Tue, 2021-02-23 09:23
Yup!...
A self-effacing sense of humor, will keep them chuckling. And wondering if that's who they will see when they look in the mirror? Great sense of humor and a great delivery. ~ Geez.
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Teddy15
Tue, 2021-02-23 09:29
Dear Geezer
Thank you Sir.
Thank you...Teddy
Obadiah Grey
Tue, 2021-02-23 10:07
Its a gift, Teddy. laughing
Its a gift, Teddy. laughing at ones self.
I do it regularly.
Obi.,,,,,, (Nice concise poetry, btw)
Teddy15
Tue, 2021-02-23 10:26
Dear Obi
It's such a treat to see you, yes I think we could all laugh at ourselves a bit more, it's so good to laugh.
Thank you...Teddy
chima ononogbu
Wed, 2021-02-24 18:27
Hi Teddy
And your laughter is infectious and can be heard from your marvelous ink. Thanks.
Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.
Teddy15
Wed, 2021-02-24 19:15
Dear Chima
Hey, that's such a fun thing to reply, I am glad if I make you chuckle. Lovely to see you.
Thank you...Teddy