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L O L H U M O R

YOU ALL MUST BY NOW KNOW
SO MANY poems you do miss on purpose

But when I compose a poem
I DON'T KNOW
WHETHER I AM A MAN OR WOMAN

I cover all human
all like vision
like desire
all need warmth and fire
I can't fulfill everyone's desire
so poetry salvos
I freely fire
some see me nude
some imagine
am I crude
not rude or too prude

still I love you
the bikini was borrowed
you know
inner wears
I don't wear also
BEING RETIRED AND AGED
I STAY ALL DAY AT HOME
NOW SHIFTING TO ROME
VENICE THEY SAY
IS A LOVELY PLACE TO ROAM
LIKE AT HOME

DID YOU NOT KNOW...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

I could have done without the naked loved visual lol

All wear
ONLY ROBES.
and drop 'em often..

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however the last lines are IMHO abrupt. I like the humor. Being retired, and no longer needing to wear the scrubs, or come home with blood on my shoes... i like the "The Bikini was borrowed." I wonder if using Speedos somewhere would work ....
Like
"Shifting to Rome in speedos"
or something like that...

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shall tomorrow
when another humour
I borrow

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