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L O L H U M O R
YOU ALL MUST BY NOW KNOW
SO MANY poems you do miss on purpose
But when I compose a poem
I DON'T KNOW
WHETHER I AM A MAN OR WOMAN
I cover all human
all like vision
like desire
all need warmth and fire
I can't fulfill everyone's desire
so poetry salvos
I freely fire
some see me nude
some imagine
am I crude
not rude or too prude
still I love you
the bikini was borrowed
you know
inner wears
I don't wear also
BEING RETIRED AND AGED
I STAY ALL DAY AT HOME
NOW SHIFTING TO ROME
VENICE THEY SAY
IS A LOVELY PLACE TO ROAM
LIKE AT HOME
DID YOU NOT KNOW...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
scribbler
Fri, 2021-02-19 22:32
Well
I could have done without the naked loved visual lol
lovedly
Sat, 2021-02-20 11:22
yes in ROME 15
All wear
ONLY ROBES.
and drop 'em often..
Ray Whitaker
Sat, 2021-02-20 21:11
a nice piece,
however the last lines are IMHO abrupt. I like the humor. Being retired, and no longer needing to wear the scrubs, or come home with blood on my shoes... i like the "The Bikini was borrowed." I wonder if using Speedos somewhere would work ....
Like
"Shifting to Rome in speedos"
or something like that...
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lovedly
Sat, 2021-02-20 22:57
ha ha
shall tomorrow
when another humour
I borrow