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SILLY SMILE...RETITLED

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2021-02-13 00:21

She smiled for just a while
I'd smile for you
all your while
ha don't take me seriously
it's smile only

I SMILE all day all night
many often ask me
are you well
Lovedly
I say no
I'm smiling
you are calling
Lovedly
smiley
but do smile with me
not at me
understand ye me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
FUN POEM INSPIRED BY PAUL
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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lovedly

Sun, 2021-02-14 11:23

lovedly's picture

Thanks Mark

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