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VALENTINE 2021

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2021-02-11 19:51

Valentine in 2021
what will it be like
masks on
no kiss
no hugs
flowers
hand over on a barge pole
six feet

For chocolates
hand over a dozen
vaccines

Heaven sent
don't later lament

Be like Romeo and Juliet
INVENT
a new world

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Valentine with a saddened heart ....
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Thu, 2021-02-11 22:50

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Hi, Lovedly,
Hmm...some good points! I like your stanza referring to Romeo and Juliet - romance will find a way! Happy Valentine's Day!
Thank you!
L

Geezer

Fri, 2021-02-12 07:33

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romance, in this day and age still can kill you, like Romeo. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Fri, 2021-02-12 11:14

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At old age let us Romeo's be
LOL
Still Happy Valentine
for youngsters like thee
he he

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